This week, I
helped review and change the diction of the business plan. I, along with the rest of the employees,
looked at the diction of the plan and changed it to where it sounded
better. We also looked at the grammar of
the plan and changed the errors that were present. By the end of the week, the sales portion of
the business plan was completed and the diction was perfect. We are almost finished with the overall
business plan, and only need to do some minor revisions with the page numbers. Additionally, as a part of the sales
department, I helped come up with a survey.
The purpose of our survey was to find ideas for new products by seeing
what students think of different sweets that we do not already sell. We came up with many different options to
guarantee that we have good results for our survey.Friday, October 2, 2015
Weekly Tasks 9/28-10/2
This week, I
helped review and change the diction of the business plan. I, along with the rest of the employees,
looked at the diction of the plan and changed it to where it sounded
better. We also looked at the grammar of
the plan and changed the errors that were present. By the end of the week, the sales portion of
the business plan was completed and the diction was perfect. We are almost finished with the overall
business plan, and only need to do some minor revisions with the page numbers. Additionally, as a part of the sales
department, I helped come up with a survey.
The purpose of our survey was to find ideas for new products by seeing
what students think of different sweets that we do not already sell. We came up with many different options to
guarantee that we have good results for our survey.
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