Business Plan Presentation Review

There were both strong and weak points in the group’s presentation.  One of the strong points is the group’s response to the questions that were presented to them.  They had many good answers to every question.  Also, the PowerPoint itself is pretty good.  Their weak points would probably be their speaking roles.  Many of the members still required their script.  Even though they had many points in their presentation that they went without the script, there was obvious struggle when they presented without the scripts.  To be honest, I think the ones that will do a better job would be Josh and Brandon.  This is because they seem to have a better grasp on what they will say without the script.  The other members did an ok job at this too, but it seemed Brandon and Josh did better. 

I think the team is not as prepared as it should have been.  The PowerPoint is fine, but they should have had more practice without their scripts.  They probably should not have had scripts in the first place.  It seemed that they were more focused on getting everything memorized, but they should have just focused on main points.  I think that the presentation may go to the finals, depending on how it goes during the competition.  The members may have practiced a lot more before the competition that I have thought.  Overall, I am confident that the team will do much better than when they started.  I believe that if they practice a bit more without the scripts before the competition, they should do fine.